Nicely Done

Well Done, it would have been great if it would stay more "ethnic - acoustic", even when it gets big. but thats just my opinion.

Good Attempt

The Classical alike writing is a nice Idea and you're with no doubt a skillfull guitarplayer.
Sadly, you got a pretty small drumset there, which doesn't fit the "greatness" of the arrangement at all. Also the background stuff (choir, bells ect.) could be worked out more to keep the listener occupied.
Last but not least, you should get the rythm-guitar straight, sometimes is just not in time.
I hope you understand this as constructive criticism. Keep working on it :)

Alex G.